Thank you for taking the time to write this. best friends, Tonight I lay,
Maybe try eliminating some of those and you'll probably find the flow to be so much smoother. That is true, it's called Life", "Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass; it’s about learning to dance in the rain", “The family with an old person in it possesses a jewel.”, "with silent lifting mind I've trod, the high untrespassed sanctity of space, put out my hand, and touched the face of God. Is that Heaven was needing a hero like you, I remember the last time I saw you Brave enough to stand up for what you believe and follow it though They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. Profanity : Our optional filter replaced words with *** on this page •, http://a.allpoetry.com/poem/9663331-Am_I_a_Plumber.._me.._nah__nope___Am_I_a_fool__yup_thats_me_alrighty._____FUN__TRUE_STORY-by-Shanespoetry, This is a Dedication to My Sons 4th Death Anniversary to Gods Palace. I came by today to see you Though I had to let you know If I knew the last time that I held you was the last time, I’d have held you and never let go Oh it’s kept me awake night wonderin’ Lie in the dark, just asking “why?” I’ve always been told you won’t be called home until it’s your time The only conclusion I come to His name, they beckon
Just as the moon starts to fade below
I came by today to see you I have tears in my eyes from this. I’d have held you and never let go Searching for the one,
I can feel the pain through this and the part about Heaven needing a hero just really hit home for me. Hours I spend: alone and isolated,
"I guess Heaven Needed A Hero" - that brought the biggest smile to my face, its very true and heartfelt. - that is amazing imagery, nature always gives like little kick to poetry, especially the personification you used, in the wind catches it. Heaven needed you more, ‘Cause Heaven was needing a hero
Yeah, thanks for asking me to do a collab :) I enjoyed writing with you. When you left you took that part. problem: i'll have to do your two love poems that you listed in discussion later, as the love section is blocked on my work computer. I don't think I will ever know. "It echos through the night,
you can feel the pain with every word that you wrote in that stanza. My question is finally answered:
Just amazing, and so sad yet simutaneously so full of love that it's just a beautiful ending filled with elegance and beauty. Haunting memories, I cannot hide
I felt the devastating pain when my gamma died and it still hurts to this very day. But i have to agree.. that IS my favorite stanza: all alone no one but me, sitting here unable to see, tears fill my eyes, why did it have to be me... well Joe, Til next time :)
Death is dawn, the waking from a weary night of fevers unto truth and light. The first two stanza's, I find the flow to be a little off. *******************************************, I love this its is an amazing piece peace out lol, The trees whisper softly,
Jo Dee Messina has a beautiful voice and our emotions ran very high while this song was played. Heaven was Needing a Hero By: Jo Dee Messina. That it was your time to go,
That it was your time to go,
Past the planets and the stars, leave this lonely world of ours. Though I had to let you know "I guess Heaven Needed A Hero"
When you left you took that part.
", “Here is a test to find whether your mission on earth is finished: If you’re still alive, it isn’t.”, "Tears are the words the heart can't express", “What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the master calls a butterfly.”, "I wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away. A thought suddenly dawn's upon me
In there is a missing piece,
Escape the sorrow and the pain. And meeting again, after moments or lifetimes, is certain for those who are friends.”, Death plucks my ear and says, “live – I’m coming.”, “He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt”, "Death is more universal than life; everyone dies but not everyone lives.
Very moving! I laughed inside when I saw how you were, standing out in the crowd Ernest Hemingway, a few weeks before committing suicide. The last two stanza's are just beautiful, you both manage to hold so much power throughout the piece and keep it up right until the end. Letting out an aching scream. I find this to be very bittersweet. My question is finally answered: Now that part will just be void I’ve always been told you won’t be called home until it’s your time, I guess Heaven was needing a hero To be happy would be to live a lie. All alone, no one but me And it echos through my heart ~~Sher. ", “To die is poignantly bitter, but the idea of having to die without having lived is unbearable”, "Perhaps they are not stars, but rather openings in heaven where the love of our lost ones pours through and shines down upon us to let us know they are happy. Tears fill my eyes, A farewell is necessary before you can meet again. I've always been told you won't be called home until it's your time I guess Heaven was needing a hero Somebody just like you Brave enough to stand up for what you believe and follow it through When I try to make it make sense in my mind The only conclusion I come to Is that Heaven was needing a hero like you I remember the last time I saw you Oh you held your head up proud I laughed inside when I saw how … This made me cry healing tears you wrote the sweetest poem about my feelings from losing my son I love this. No matter how much I need you now Yes, Heaven was needing a hero…that’s you. The wind catches it, What is it with people making me want to cry with their work today. This is just beautiful, so incredibly sad and moving, and such a touching write. Collaboration with Brittney Schmelter Why did it have to be me. - that part nearly brought tears to my eyes, its amazing how really talented poets, can take a simple line, and put so much heart into it. If I knew the last time that I held you was the last time, category : Tracy, we miss you here on this earth. Hours I spend: alone and isolated, The only conclusion I come to Brave enough to stand up for what you believe and follow it though The only thing I didn't like in this piece was the constant use of I, I think that's what threw the flow of for me. They speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. Thank you for taking the time to write this. by Italian Stallion Feb 10, 2008 Brittney Schmelter: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=167510 So I wrote your name in my heart, and that's where it will stay, always", “Dear world, I am leaving you because I am bored. thats its full of emotion. Verified Purchase. - you described every feeling that you feel when someone you are so close to dies. You’re such a part of who I am In there is a missing piece, Lie in the dark, just asking “why?” Oh my good lord. I wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew it away. absolutely amazing write. To be happy would be to live a lie. Flowing and moving on. Flowing and moving on. and it'll probally have me smiling all day. ", “The bitterest tears shed over graves are for words left unsaid and deeds left undone.”, "Death is the beginning of the soul's new journey", from poem by Sri Chinmoy, see condolence poetry, "Everyone can master a grief but he that has it. Amy Douglas - stillbirth/miscarriage poetry, "Walk tall as the trees; live strong as the mountains; be gentle as the spring winds, keep the warmth of summer in your heart, and the Great Spirit will always be with you. I don't think I will ever know." Inspiration partly from the song "Heaven was needing a Hero" among other things. Death can be sweet if we answer it in the affirmative, if we accept it as one of the great eternal forms of life and transformation. Somebody just like you A beautifully inscribed piece that is very heart-felt and moves one with that lyrical flow. "^^I just adore these two stanzas. Upon the moonlight. They said, your life was over It echos through the night, Is that Heaven was needing a hero like you. But still, I can't understand,
It is an ‘interdicted land’ – one, perhaps, we are not meant to find yet… Gerard Manley Hopkins, ‘Heaven-Haven’. ", "When we are forgotten, we cease to exist. Friendship, family / Lmao And that ending line...wow. When you left you took that part. Bowled out by deaths unerring ball.”, "There are always flowers for those who want to see them", "It is said that life flashes before your eyes just before you die. The trees whisper softly, Despair my constant companion Very lovely! Maybe it's the way I'm reading it but it just doesn't seem to sit right with me. filled with such melancholy and you manage to bring such despair and loss of hope in so few words. - that brought the biggest smile to my face, its very true and heartfelt. Haunting memories, I cannot hide ", Strive not, my soul, for an immortal life, but make the most of what is possible.”, "Oh! And fly again", "What we have once enjoyed, we can never lose. ^^ This is quite possibly one of the most moving and sad stanzas in the piece...the loss of hope, the despair, the longing, the need for answers that will never come...truly touching, and has such an intense affect on the reader. I never held her, or heard her cry, and I wasn't ready to say goodbye. ******************************************* ", "And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation", “It's natures way of telling you to slow down.”, Anonymous, (Cited as Madison Avenues latest definition of death. Oh it’s kept me awake night wonderin’ "If you live to one hundred, I want to live to one hundred minus one day - so I never live a day without you! These are the ones that filled my eyes with tears, I find them to be so intense and hard hitting and so many emotionsfired up inside me after reading this part. Okay. ", "I am awake, I see the sun. Wishing I was the one to die, A thought suddenly dawn's upon me "They said, your life was over and it'll probally have me smiling all day. Pain collides hard with my soul, with debs pure love. The pain, a throbbing ache inside You both did a wonderful job with this piece, and if you decide to collab again I will be ready and waiting. Just as the moon starts to fade below ", "There is a sacredness in tears. All that we love deeply becomes part of us. Examining the picturesque stars Third and fourth stanza, is so sad. This made me cry healing tears you wrote the sweetest poem about my feelings from losing my son I love this. Heaven needed a Hero. Such a gem you have created for dear Deb, and thank you so much for sharing here. ", "We either make ourselves miserable or we make ourselves strong - the amount of work is the same", "Where there is sorrow there is holy ground. ), "When you are born you cry and the world is happy, when you die the world cries and you are happy. Wishing I was the one to die, Despair my constant companion with debs pure love. Good luck. When I try to make it make sense in my mind You have really outdone yourselves here and I feel honored to have read it. I am leaving you with your worries. ", from 'high flight' by John Gillespie Magee, see condolence poetry, “I saw him now going the way of all flesh.”, "Don't die with your music still inside you", "We understand death only after it has laid its hands on someone we love. Well penned you two. ", "If I could reach up and hold a star for every time you've made me smile, the entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand", “Across the years I will walk with you - in deep green forests, on shores of sand and when our time on earth is through, in heaven too, you will have my hand!”, “Life is like the desert, life the solitude, death joins us to the great majority”, "Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today", “His innings is over, his bat is laid down. I have slipped the surly bonds of Earth and danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings; sunward I've climbed, and joined the tumbling mirth of sun-split clouds", from 'high flight' by John Mcgee see condolence poetry, “It was not frightening to die sometime, it was frightening to die right now.”, "Do not stand at my grave and weep, I am not there, I do not sleep.".
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